The Snake Eating It's Own Tail: The Protocols of the Elders of Zion as presented in Behold a Pale Horse pp. 318-319
Protocol 19 I learned awhile back that when you have an editor you don't have to do everything. You can, just not. As the writer, my job is to put the things on the page. As the editor the job is to clean up that mess. I do not know if I'm allowed to show notes I get from my editor, so I won't, but I'll say this--most of the notes are about word choice and phrasing. It's very rarely about the content. When it is about content, it's almost always that I need to take stuff out, not because I'm wrong (though that does happen), but mostly because what I've said isn't needed. When I teach my writing students, I tell them something similar, most of the time the writing is bad because it's too long not too short. They've been trying to make a five page report five pages for all of high school and here I am trying to teach them that if I say 1000 words, 800 will do if you've made your point. The point of that ironic introduction is that Protocol...